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Train Ride Through Innocence by ~TTFAA:iconTTFAA:



I won't be a kid forever,
So I'll write these words down now
To remind myself later of who I used to be.

What the future has in store is way beyond me.

So I'll jot these words down into my notebook, and I'll skim over them later.


     I'll board this night-time train and watch out my window as the pitch black sky rolls by...Little crystal stars dot this back-drop...(I'll miss them) But when I awake at dawn, morning colors are there to greet me.(I remind myself to breathe)

Soft hues and baby blues...firey orange and brilliant gold...when I wake up.. I almost forget to breathe...


My soul will never grow old...

     
     I take this night-time train down to the soul of Concord...the heart of Chicago...then through the concrete veins of my hometown...
I'm a citizen of the world, with a promise that will not soon be forgotten.
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Author's Comments

I wrote this late one night after listening to Fall Out boy's EP "My Heart Will Always be the B-side to My Tongue".
I enjoy reading it a lot more the way it's written in my notebook...just feels more personal...

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:iconoctoberazriel:
I like it.*faves*

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"Here's our only conversation we've ever had without using our words to show. And our love is a creation of all the things that
have ever had a chance to grow."

Charades - Stephen Jerzak
:icondetectivesocks:
That was amazing man! I love it!

:+favlove:

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:damphyr:"Science is for those who learn; Poetry, for those who know"
:damphyr: Joseph Roux?
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L O V E
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Seriously, will you be the Pete to my Patrick?
Marry me! please? :fingerscrossed:

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"I don't look like i'd be that good. But I'm amazing" - P.Stump
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I love the mayhem more than the lull
:iconttfaa:
lol Thankyou! :D

And OF COURSE! XD

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Well, it's "Nine in the Afternoon", and I'm feeling "Pretty.Odd."....then again...the weather never did "give a damn about me." Since we're just "Folkin' Around", how about we "take a chance, take our shoes off," and "dance in the rain"?
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Thankyou! :heart:

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Well, it's "Nine in the Afternoon", and I'm feeling "Pretty.Odd."....then again...the weather never did "give a damn about me." Since we're just "Folkin' Around", how about we "take a chance, take our shoes off," and "dance in the rain"?
:iconttfaa:
:aww: Thankyou very much! :D

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Well, it's "Nine in the Afternoon", and I'm feeling "Pretty.Odd."....then again...the weather never did "give a damn about me." Since we're just "Folkin' Around", how about we "take a chance, take our shoes off," and "dance in the rain"?
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That was great! I really liked it!

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Great Musicals: POTO, Wicked, The Last Five Years, Moulin Rouge, Songs for a New World, Sweeney Todd: The Demon Barber of Fleet Street, Jesus Crist Superstar, Avenue Q, and Across the Universe if Musical movies Count.
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I really like this for some reason, it just has this sort of calming feel to it, like riding on a train or in a car and just staring out the window, watching the world pass by. Nice job (:

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Hey, I'm Cody (:
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Great Minds Wear the Same Socks.
:iconttfaa:
Haha,thanks so much! :D That's what I was hoping people would get from it.

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Well, it's "Nine in the Afternoon", and I'm feeling "Pretty.Odd."....then again...the weather never did "give a damn about me." Since we're just "Folkin' Around", how about we "take a chance, take our shoes off," and "dance in the rain"?

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